12:05 Problema na tradução. Correção: “Certo, obrigado.”
00:52 Problema de tradução. Em todas as traduções, exceto na francesa, “ケーブルテレビ” foi traduzido para algo como “TV a cabo”. O problema dessa tradução é que no Japão o conceito de TV a cabo é um pouco diferente dos outros países.
Não há muitas informações em inglês sobre o assunto. A Wikipédia em inglês, por exemplo, aborda apenas parte do assunto. Na Wikipédia em japonês (tradução automática), por outro lado, há mais informações.
Provavelmente o que ela quis dizer com “TV a cabo” é que elas estão participando de um programa dos canais comunitários (“コミュニティチャンネル”), ou seja, de um programa que só será visto naquela região. Nessa apresentação aparece que a cobertura de TV a cabo atinge 52.2% das residências japonesas, uma porcentagem maior do que ocorre no Brasil, em torno de 33%. Por outro lado nessa mesma apresentação aparece nem todas assinam canais pagos. Provavelmente, diferente do que geralmente acontece aqui, é possível assumir que “TV a cabo” não seja um conceito tão ligado ao de “TV por assinatura”.
Considerando tais informações e seguindo o exemplo da tradução francesa uma tradução melhor seria “TV local” ou, ainda, “TV regional”.
07:58 Erro de revisão. Correção: “no Centro de Lazer, e também aqui no Centro de Limpeza.”
00:27 Erro de revisão. Correção: “Não se preocupe, não vai acontecer nada.”
03:32 Problema de revisão. Possíveis correções:
16:14 Fala não traduzida. Possível correção: “Ela é tão grande e está brincando!”
00:11 Problema de revisão. Correção: “Feito com o mirin especial de Nagarekawa, essa carninha bem quente e”
16:47 Problema de revisão. Correção: “Incluindo a lança, os modificadores de voz e o peixe,”
16:54 Problema de revisão. Não seria melhor adicionar um termo mais comum para facilitar a compreensão? A tradução para espanhol usou simplesmente “uma espécie de monge”. Uma possível correção: “Você é uma monja asceta?”
22:01 Erro de revisão. Correção: “então vou tirar umas fotos.”
08:07 Erro de tradução. Um significado possível para kiln é forno. Correção: “Desculpa, deixei meu forno ligado, também.”
18:48 Erro de revisão. Correção: “dos personagens fofos e divertidos há alguns dias?”
20:56 Tradução inconsistente. Em 21:05, quando a Saori avisa que as correntes acabaram, o termo “strap” foi traduzido.
06:46 Erro de tradução. Correção: “Por exemplo, se a música vender um milhão de cópias, vocês ganhariam…”
11:24 Erro de revisão. Nessa fala “bastante” é um advérbio e, por isso, é invariável. Correção: “Nós erramos bastante.”
14:30 Problema de revisão. A duas últimas vogais estão trocadas. Correção: “nagarekawa gaaruzu“
Há vários outros problemas de revisão na música, como “kenka” no lugar de “keikei”. Considerando que a estilização pode ser melhorada aqui está a correção completa da leitura das músicas desse episódio:
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O player suporta essa estilização. É importante que a cor secundária do estilo seja alterada para algo como &HE0AE9B&. A letra da música foi conferida usando as informações dessa página e dessa página.
21:06 Erro de revisão. Correção: “Ah, Nagarekawa, a cidade linda“